Needs a lot of Polish
Im sorry but this falsh was not very good at all. The animation was choppy and slow, It had no sound. And you were trying to emulate one of the best animations on the Internet. It was an attempt I guess and so I give you credit for that. However, before trying to emulate one of the best I would recommend it looks as good as the original, if not better. Practice, spend some time and get that skill to the level, where it challenges the original artist. I'm not saying stop posting, what I'm saying is post more stuff and get better. Spend more time getting the skill up!
Needs more time and practice.
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